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I don't like to pick out individual lines, but the segment:
"protein in the eyes’ reversed image.
Where are you?
Sleeping, I am as I left myself"
Is absolutely amazing. And has made me read the poem several times, to light it in different hues.
Overall I find it wonderful. But the title is a bit confusing. You seem confrontational with the title, and almost critical. But the poem it self is one of weakness, understanding, and almost surrender toward the end. Or at least that is my read of it.
The shape is also really well done. I get so sick of boring formats :)
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12/07/11 5:45pm
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