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Brava technique of extended alliteration!
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11/23/09 11:51pm
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I just want to say that this is a wonderful poem and that lots of readers of different types and attention spans (myself?) can enjoy this because it is well-crafted and economical but fluid (it goes without saying) and there is entertaining word-play and there are delicious cultural allusions, but neither the word-play nor the allusions jump out at you, they are just tucked in there just beneath the surface. Which is part of the point, as I take it.
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06/16/09 11:11pm
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